Talk:Forbidden Forest *Comic*/@comment-28225896-20150722035834

Here's a sneak peak. This is the transcript for scene 1

 Scene 1: The Blow Out

 Setting: Outside of a small quaint house. Flowers and bushes border the house. 2 trees on the left side of the house. Medium sidewalk. Carmex and Cloudy are talking.

 Carmex: This is just perfect. Why would she cancel?

 Cloudy: I don’t know. Maybe she was scarred?

 Carmex: Ugh, she’s just...why?

 Cloudy: Well...I mean we are staying in *whispers* the forbidden forest.

 Carmex: It’s not called that. It’s Tal’ Mauv Corbridge Forest owned by Mr. and Mrs. Tal’ Muav.

 Cloudy: Well, I would be scared also to learn about the murders.

 Carmex: What ever. Those “murders” are fake. Stories the Tri Boys thought off.

 Cloudy: Speaking of Tri Boys here they come.

 The Tri Boys (Cornpuff, Sword, and Nesl are walking down the sidewalk. They stop and start mouthing up Cloudy and Carmex.

 Sword: Hey wouldya look at this. Carmy found a friend.

 NES: Looks like a punk to me.

 Carmex: Shut up! She’s nicer than you jerks.

 Sword picks up Carmex in rage.

 Sword: Open up your mouth again little girl! I’ll teach you to talk to us like that.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cloudy: Stop!

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> NES grabs cloudy and pushes her away.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Carmex: I’m sorry! Please put me down!

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Sword throws Carmex down on the concrete.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Sword: Let’s go boys.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> The Tri Guys starts to walk away, but the smallest one, Cornpuff who was believed 12, went back to Carmex who was sitting up and rubbing her head.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cornpuff: Hey!

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Carmex: Ah don’t hurt me.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Carmex puts her hands up as a shield to her face.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cornpuff: No, I came here to say sorry.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Carmex: What?

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cornpuff: Sorry.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cloudy: You all right Carmy?

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Carmex: Fine.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Sword: Eh! Puffy get goin’. *Sword yells from across the road*

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cornpuff: I gotta go

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cornpuff runs off

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Cloudy: He seems like the nice one.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Carmex looks up at Cloudy and smiles.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> ~End of Scene 1~

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