Talk:Leafy's story/@comment-27026386-20151228104610/@comment-26429063-20151228123020

Okay, here are my "excuses" why the both of us didn't ask each other's opinion on the plot before put it in.

First of all, I am mostly active when Bumblebee isn't, and clockwise to me. You could be saying "than says them in (his) talk page" but seriously, it's a plot, it contains more than just 300 letters in a message.

Second, I didn't create the chapters. Bumblebee did, therefore I know absolutely nothing about the plot in it. I only change the lines to match the characters' personalities in this.

Third, (make sure it all fits). How is Puffball here? I clearly state that it is in Post-BFDIA, so why is she here? I tried to make this fan fiction to have nothing to do with BFDIA or (mostly) of its characters. Because, Leafy is still in hiding, and blah blah, BFDIA clearly didn't happen when this fan fiction started. You have got to say, I did like what you said.

And finally, it wasn't a big deal or anything. I edit the section, and then Bumblebee added it again. It isn't like he reverted all of my edits or something.