User blog:TheTwistedMangle/Pretend to Remember Question 2

So, this is another question for my BFDIA fanfiction. On my blog post asking which character voice had developed the worst and best, I got some feedback from NLG343.

He told me that Teardrop needed a voice, Book's should be more masculine, and Pin was too masculine.

Okay, I can easily fix Pin's voice because it needs to be less assertive and more feminine because I know what a feminine voice is (since I'm female myself).

This problem is I don't know how to write a voice for Teardrop nor how to write a masculine voice for Book, especially the last one. It's difficult to write for me because I usually don't write that way with female characters.

Does anybody know someone who can help with this or would understand this better than I do? Again,I'm trying to improve the story.