Talk:OC Popularity Vote/@comment-27019559-20160531103348

So, Elimination 15.

First off, for intensity, Gamey's last words wasn't that interested or long, either. He just said one line which pretty much the opposite of who is eliminated in a show would say (for the sake or rating).

Secondly, this doesn't matter, but you just jumped in the plot twist instantly. The other eliminations didn't show signs of the codes or anything, and in this Elimination, you just jumped right into the plot twist.

Thirdly, Cyan Ball. For a guy who just says that he found the real secret of the island, being surpirsed when Joystick reveals the truth wasn't the best thing to put together. It just turned a character from being an important part for the plot twist to just a normal guy who is gonna die. And seriously, how does Tsoh knows that everything would be turned into codes? Did he do it before? I know, logic is non-existent on almost everything, but for the sake of ratings, I will include this bit.

And rewind for a little bit, what kind of investigation is that, seriously. And no, that's not the worst, the transistion is. Cyan Ball just says that there are trees that can be opened, and the next thing you know, Joystick is revealing everything. Kinda ruin a surprise there.

And Tsoh said that he was surprised, and then joined in the plot twist. Look, you should have stocked with people being surprised about it, and people revealing the truth. First Cyan Ball, and then Tsoh. To be honest, I know he might be lying, but the exclamation point kinda ruined everything for that matter.

Other than people switching from here to be here and the sudden transition, the plot twist is quite nice, surprising and was very detailed. Despite the rants about how the characters ruined the intensity before, my hears really skipped beats while reading that. Kudos for that.

And the ending, it was quite lazy and sudden, I have to say that. I know, ending an epic thing isn't easy, but it kinda ruined the plot twist, again. Both of them.

Overall: 3.43/5.