User blog comment:AlexAnimations0421/If BFDIA Contestants Were High Schoolers/@comment-31165208-20171029163531

This is a good start, but I don't see the need to put yourself and your OC smack dab in the middle of the story without explanation. Self-inserts are also greatly frowned upon as well.

Also, how do you expect me to edit this? I'm not a content mod or admin.