User blog comment:TheTwistedMangle/Firebook One-shot: Irresistible/@comment-30144781-20170521014658/@comment-31165208-20170521135508

Thanks! If you liked this one, check out my Object Overload one-shot here!

The reason why Firey said the word "blood" is the reader was suppose to infer that Book had blood on her cover and pages because of the line "He observed her." I'll change that part slightly to make it less confusing.

And how was my hook? In school, I've learned that the first line is important to grab their attention and interest them.