Talk:Battle for Dream Island Autopsy 2/@comment-26429063-20160520105719

4.6/28 (16.42%)

Here is my opinions on the parts where the comedy is most easily spotted.

''Firey ~ Uhh… where am I? I-I died, so… I'm most likely in a dead dimension already! HAH! Geddit? Anyways enough joking time to find the others.''

It doesn't really sound a joke to me, nor was it funny in any way. It sounded just normal and sensate enough to not be a joke. --- ''Firey : Fiiiinnnneeeeee!!! Jeez, can't take a selfie? Anyways, here's some fake money I used using toilet paper. Wait, where did you get a stall?

Pine Tree : The real question is WHEN did you get a stall. Hahahahahaha, lol I'm so funny amirite? Shomomomo!''

Agreed, wasn't funny. It's just changing the question words at the wrong time. The fake money part has a little of comedy, I guess, but again, it's not that funny to begin with. - The middle half with the Announcer was just filled with senseless vulgar, in which they don't even make the sentences any funnier. Well, I will give some points to the part with Firey talking out loud his plans, and the picture with the dog. (and also my cameo)

Screaming kid? Eh, literally no one laughs at that overused thing by now. Not if just used alone on context.

And the last two lines, really, the last bit of the saying was unecessary, or, should be changed to something else.

Overall, I would say that it isn't funny, sure, only a bit of it does, but I think you should start making jokes that are more unpridcitable and aren't overused. Again, this is just my opinion.